>Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print. >Never use a long word where a short one will do. >If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out. >Never use the passive where you can use the active. >Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent. >Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
Thoughts?
Oliver Hughes
Why does everyone hate passive writing?
Carson Rogers
All spooks.
Wyatt Parker
Who decides what everyday English is? My everyday English is full of jargon.
Bentley Ward
he wanted to communicate to the people. He succeeded, so good for him. If that's your goal its a good formula.
Brayden Evans
/thread
Lincoln Nguyen
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Adrian Sullivan
>English rules for writing My holy keks, what a load of whaleshit. English is the shame of human culture.
Cooper Howard
He had a few good concepts, but he wasn't a good writer.
Noah Reed
Because it means you are not assigning responsibility or blame for an action.
John Nelson
What do you mean? Why is the writer's 'responsibility' important? Sorry I'm confused
Jaxson Thomas
I'm thinking why I would listen to advice from someone whose prose was nothing stellar... oops, I mean "not very good"
Landon Rogers
Wow, you sure showed him.
Austin Bennett
He died! his death made no great stir on earth: His burial made some pomp; there was profusion Of velvet, gilding, brass, and no great dearth Of aught but tears — save those shed by collusion.
For these things may be bought at their true worth; Of elegy there was the due infusion — Bought also; and the torches, cloaks, and banners, Heralds, and relics of old Gothic manners, >now again following "your" rules He died, nobody cared, His burial was fancy The rest of this "poem" is "gibberish"
Isaiah Johnson
>Never use a long word where a short one will do >writes a novel about how the reduction of language destroys humanity
What did he mean by this?
Samuel Jones
got eeem
Blake Mitchell
>Never use a long word where a short one will do. >If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out. >Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent
Get fucked. I like words.
Austin Richardson
His essay on the use of the English Language specifically relates to journalism, instructions etc. He never for a moment meant for it to relate to poetry or literature. Just so everyone knows.
Ryan Hernandez
since when is george orwell a foremost authority on prose stylism
Isaiah Edwards
he's not, but his essays are nearly all fantastic. if you're writing for a "non-literary" audience you'd be hard pressed to find a better mentor.
Carson Hall
not him, but compare these sentences.
1) Cain killed Abel. 2) Abel was killed by Cain. 3) Abel was killed.
The second and third sentences are written in passive. you can see that there's less "movement/action". They produce less impact than the first.
Also with passive voice you can remove responsibility (3).
Gavin Scott
Where's the responsibility in that? It's not up to the author to create impact, that's just a byproduct of someone's experience reading it.
Levi Cruz
what do you mean where's the responsibility in that?
Cain is responsible for killing Able.
Sentence 3 omits that responsibility; you don't know who killed him.
I agree that impact is the byproduct of someone's experience reading it but the author controls how that person experiences it. It's the same with music, art etc. Persuasive pieces are a good example too.