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The rent is to high living here between reasons to live.

If this isn't a poem trash it.

>to high

incomprehensible/10

Hey guys can you rate my poem

The Rent
Is to high,
Living here between
Reasons to live?

garbage

Why?

You ruined it. It's shit, you're dumb. Also unfunny.

Rate my opening line

riverrun, past Eve and Adams, from swerve of shore to bend of bay, brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth, Castle and Environs.

Never read anything more pretentious in my life.

Rate my opening line: Are you a computer? Because I want to turn you on.

Rate my opening line:
>In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God.

kek, thanks jung

Ambiguity is something which can be considered in many ways. Some think of it in a certain fashion while others think of it in a completely different fashion. Still others consider it differently.

Here's maybe a clearer arrangement:
>The rent here is too high, living between reasons to live.
I like it btw

All-time best

Thanks nigger

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The night was cold and dark with a slight breeze lightly blowing the leaves underfoot. On a front porch sat an elderly man, he went by no name to most people.

Loose the first sentence.

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Fi widda murderah hi gon gun com uppa wid fi inna dih nigga ha he an ho he come up like dis he huss.

i feel like one of us is having a stroke. quick, OP, do you smell burning feathers?

It was a dark and stormy night.
I like peanuts

Blaaaaaargh! Bits of sick were drowning in the canal.

Kek tanks Warthon.

Learn to use commas correctly.
And I doubt that the leaves underfoot were blowing unless you have extremely light footsteps.

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