>It took the consumption of countless hours of internet, fantasy novels, music, and t.v., to finally understand that this thing we call real life is the most absurd existence of them all
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>t.v.,
I don't know how I feel about your sentence but the smug anime girl makes me feel deeply insecure and anxious
Stick to singing and dancing, please.
Not smug, but cutesy innocent
What would you use then?
Can't do those either
>It took countless hours of internet, fantasy novels, music, and t.v., to finally understand that this thing we call real life is the most absurd existence of them all
>It took countless hours of internet, fantasy novels, music, and t.v., to understand that this thing we call real life is the most absurd existence of them all
>It took countless hours of internet, fantasy novels, music, and t.v., to understand that real life is the most absurd existence of them all
>It took countless hours of internet, fantasy novels, music, and t.v., to understand that real life is the most absurd existence of all
>It took countless hours of internet, fantasy novels, music, and t.v., to understand - real life is the most absurd existence
>Countless hours of internet, fantasy novels, music, and t.v., all to understand - real life is absurd
>Hours of internet, fantasy novels, music, and t.v., all to understand - real life is absurd
>Internet, novels, music, t.v.; all to understand - life is absurd
What other existences are there?
the ones I outlined?
>It took the consumption of countless hours of shitposting, troll threads, reaction images, and memes, to finally understand that this thing we call real life is the most retarded expression of them all.