Is this a good line?

In this moment, I am euphoric

holy... i want more...

i just googled it. Salinger wrote it

>The sentence begins with understatement, then ends with her being the most important thing in the universe

Top notch analysis. You went to Harvard, didn't you?

a bit much. Instead you can say "she was holding the city together" or "with the night on her shoulders"

hmmmmm

Is that not a good analysis? How would someone better educated put it? I'm just a pleb novelist.

your analysis was fine, is a retard.

It's a fucking copypaste of Shakespeare. Haven't you read The Tempest? Second act, look it up.

You just stated what was apparent to anyone with half a brain. It wasn't "analysis," but a really dull and mindless play-by-play.

Read more, shitwit.