Can hip-hop/rap be Veeky Forums?

Can hip-hop/rap be Veeky Forums?

I had a conversation with an Oxford language professor who was interested at the idea that poetry could be somehow living on in popular culture through rap. I often here very good lines from rappers, however then they ruin songs with cheesy/awkward attempts.

Pic related is a poem Tupac wrote to his girlfriend. It's utter horse shit, I know. It made me think that rappers are untalented at doing things outside of rhyming. Actually, no, the rhyming here isn't even good - it's contrived. "Regal grace". Cringe.

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>Can hip-hop/rap be Veeky Forums?
I have no idea what it means to be Veeky Forums, but I did come across some lyrically interesting rap songs. They are far from being the next Baudelaire but they aren't dumb.

>poetry could be somehow living on in popular culture through rap.
Yeah, that's not an unlikely situation. Written poetry today is cryptic (if not obscurantist) and has completely abandoned the traditional tools of prosody, making it less interesting when it's actually read out loud. Who knows, the whole field could die out. Rap on the other hand is simpler, accessible, rhythmic and sometimes pretty technically impressive (I've heard songs that rhyme with the same syllable all the way through) because it is meant to be heard, and has musical accompaniment, just like the ancient Greek poetry and drama.

No that would just be cultural appropriation

God not this shit again. I would report this thread if there was any actual basis in doing so. Lyrics =/= poetry. Lyrics = lyrics. Poetry should be able to stand by itself and on its own merits alone. Does a book need to have pictures to communicate its point to you? I will certainly say that the poetry in the public eye now is unanimously garbage (writing a paragraph and entering random line breaks doesn't make poetry) but rap lyrics are not a replacement.

why do brainlets always try to act like rap is lit? is it because they are not used to full sentences?

most lyrics in all genres are written secondary to the music. look at how rappers compose, they get a beat, then they let it flow into them and come up with some shit, then they edit it and clean it up for production. there is very little thought in consumer media lyrics, unless you're amazed by illiteration and metaphor, theyre really not interesting.

yes i recognise the hilarious irony/freudian slip in misspelling alliteration 'illiteration'

Looks like I just found the perfect title for my ironic rap album.

if rap tries to be cultural it's pretentious cringe. rap artists should stick to their roots not let their ability to make sentences rhyme make them feel schooled. they should stick to whatever poetic value there is to the life of the lower social class urban outcasts. they're only different from junkies because they gather around to humble brag about their illicit activities and are not smart enough that their ambition goes wasted. respect if you make it though, but not even a significant amount of successful rap careers are culturally important besides appealing to underdeveloped teens.

This, anons take note. Now pack your shit , leave this board and never use rap and literature in the same sentence again.

I love this board.

"Used to paint
Hard to admit that I 'used' to paint
Natural light on a human face
Stenciled fire on his roommate's bass
It was blooming addiction
A miss and a push and a pigment
Book like a tattooed pigskin, look
Pinhead kids intermittent
Drank Kool-Aid from a tube of acrylic
And I grew up in a linseed oil over linen
Joy to the poison, voice in the resin
Capture a map of the gesture
Back up, add a little accurate fat to the figure
Redo that, move that inwards
Zinc-white lightning shoots from his fingers
Studios drone with allusions of tinctures
Stay tuned for the spooky adventures
You can imagine the stars that align
When a forearm starts foreshortening right
Or a torso hung on a warping spine
Of proportion reads as warm and alive
Routine day with a dirt cheap brush
Then a week goes by and it goes untouched
Then two, then three, then a month
Then the rest of your life, you beat yourself up
I left some seasons eager to fall
I left some work to bury alive
I let my means of being dissolve
I let my person curl up and die
Eating up his innards in unfeasible anxiety is brutally committed to relinquishing his privacy aligning with the trials of the anti-Midas
Nap on the back lawn, look up at the sky, it's..."


there is good rap, but it's generally worse than poetry

I don't think so. It is distinguished by delivery and the underlying music. It isn't the same as poetry, you're not meant to just read it (though I believe there are styles of poems that fall into this too), you're meant to hear how the actor delivers it and in a particular context or mood. Pauses, timing, tone and emotion embedded in the words; are of equal importance (perhaps more) than the words themselves. It is more music than literature, I don't think music counts as literature. Certainly not popular music.

more lyrics

I need a North Star

I'm gonna kill myself eventually..
I feel it build like it's a habit that's instilled in me
I've been trying to warn my broken family
I hope they're happy. I hope they're happy.
I want to tell them it's okay if I just disappear
I fear existence.. I see my parents.
in my memory, letting me see the damage
They inflicted, but I cherished the pain, at least I had them.
They only paid attention when they bruise
So that's the muse that I use to retain you.
It's okay; let me tell the truth.
Music isn't therapy; it's a form of self-abuse
I don't have a reason to live.
Psychopathic, I should cease to exist
A black rose with poisoned tipped thorns.
Enjoyment left for... a reason I don't yet know.
abandon is growing, I'm feeling my whole skin
eroding, I'm closer to death than I know
but I've chosen to balance the weight using memory
that ruined everything.
All I want is a sanctum,
Serendipity or a reason to care explicitly
Please be luciferous...
If you're trying to help.. I lost light tossing pennies in a well.
I need a north star.
I need a north star.
Guide me in the dark.. find the tiny piece of heart in my body
and then inspire me to start.
Please.. I'm entirely at fault.
Threw myself to the pain and now this fire breeds my thoughts.
Platitudes.. I don't need them.
colloquialisms are for the children..
Results that they've given are non-existent..
Talking as if you understand me is different
I need you to listen.
I need you to listen.
That's the difference.

*another song, 2nd verse

I see the fire when I close my eyes
Am I supposed to hide the feelings that I hold inside?
Walking barefoot on the sun with my severed feet
Looking for a place in the fire when you remember me
there is nothing but the flame inside
I never knew that my suffering became alive
and it combined... I didn't love my
spirit, so my mother has witnessed her youngest son die
It's hard to see when you're already blind
When you've dived inside the fire for the Seventh time
When you feel your skin boil but you're cold as ice
and you can't help but believe that you're a prototype
But I guess it's insecurity...
because I'm never in security when moving me
and I'll never be the person I could truly be
I'm just watching my life pass through a movie screen..

2pac is actually one of the worst rappers if you're judging him on technical abilities. He's all about the "soul" of his art.

>I never sleep cause sleep is the cousin of death

Was this a reference to the Greeks?

In the XXI century, the Greeks are so ingrained that you probably reference the Greeks on a daily basis.
I probably did it several times in the last sentence.

the answer to your question is no

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If you played it off as you being ironic we couldn't have contested it

I'm gonna be legit for a second and say, I like poems that can talk, that can speak, that can say. I don't like the tongue twisting turbulence of the intellectual pursuit. When I can feel the emotion that's when I delight, when a poem has more syllables than words I can't hear it so it's mute.

Can animals produce culture? Ridiculous.

>can a nigger create literature
no

Just one possible scenario:
>The 2057 Nobel prize for literature goes to Marshal Bruce Mathers III.
> Everybody will loose their shit that it isn't Kendrick.

It's Shakespeare, actually. I remember there being something similar to that in Macbeth

Bob Dylan

Don't diss my bitch, Rupi.

does the truth hurt?