What went wrong?
What went wrong?
Jordan Carter
Daniel Gomez
It was published.
Xavier Morris
trite garbage
by a poet
who is only famous
because she
is a poc
and talks about rape and periods
Jaxon Watson
>went
if the very idea, before the writing even begins, is a mistake, then nothing went wrong, it's just one bad idea after another one, a cock-up cascade, if you will
Samuel Ross
read my book
about whats wrong with
people hating
everything 'woman'
Brayden Edwards
POO
Jackson Cox
The last fifty years of poetry.
Charles Morgan
In the loo
/thread
Landon Sanchez
Nothing. It's an excellent, emotionally moving, book of a poetry. There's a reason it has such high critical acclaim.
Thomas Bennett
lol
Camden Flores
he told me
it was my fault.
he told me
'clean that up now! that's dirty!
clean
your
self
now!'
i told him
'my culture doesn't believe in toilets.
my culture believes in mother earth
and production
and natural smells'
and i
flushed him
away
away
away
Noah Clark
too much honey, not enough milk
Dominic Bennett
i wonder how she likes to fuck
Elijah Reyes
people tell me
that toilet witches don't exist
then why
does it smell like death in there?
Connor Smith
she's a submissive slut who loves feeling chad drain his nads down her every hole
Elijah Murphy
Nothing went wrong, it's just a journal from a woman sold as poetry, and other stupid women went apeshit for it.
Evan Young
Maybe you are thinking of something else.
Colton Turner
You know you're shitty at your craft when the parodies are completely indistinguishable from original. I would be embarrassed if I were her.
Crawling
in my skin
these Wounds they
will
not
heal
^Literally as good as anything she ever wrote.
Aaron Baker
im so desensitized but that was disgusting
Gavin Gomez
ugh, just from the picture you know that the books cover is coated in that waxy cheapo shit
Ayden Flores
she's made more money
and can get more dick
and get more pussy
and will be read by more people
than anyone on Veeky Forums
ever will
so i think it all went right
quite quite right
Jaxon Young
How does she do it Veeky Forums?
It's just so....inspiring.
Colton Martinez
I sit in shame
kneeling down
i hear her moans
he slaps her again
their hips slap again
lost in a trance
i begin to tug
myself to them
we are together
they are together
but in this moment
i sit alone
in the corner