Is this the Literature club?

>better at storytelling
Name one video game that doesn't have a fucking GARBAGE story.

Join the Outlaws of the Marsh reading group if you want to improve Veeky Forums.

I hope this was satire

I love you Monika

wew

you better believe it bucko

This. The game needed to feel like an actual dating sim with more interaction. Sayori's death is shocking and Yuri's death where you have to stay with the body all weekend as life drains from her is disturbing too, but overall it could've been more convincing.

Saying that, one of the more surprising free to play games. I thought I was getting meme'd when people were saying it's a psychological horror and it was all cutesy anime grills. Not bad work for a small dev team.