Is this a good short story

>but in
karma is a bitch

i'm sorry i will kill myself for this piece it is beyond reprehinsible

You see, the Great Creator always sides with other creators, not the destroyers who pretentiously refer to themselves as critics.

Keep on chugging, OP. You are an artist.

Don't do it, OP! The repliers in this thread are just jealous. Your story is decent. Keep writing, and you will write great ones. I can assure you.

>Keep on chugging, OP. You are an artist.

No I'm not I am worthless as everyone in this thread has demonstrated beyond a resonible doubt

No I won't you just don't want blood on your hands

no, but someone already posted it in the thread where they were going on about killing themselves.

i remember the line about the ants, the rest is unmemorable, like a juvenile lydia davis kind of thing.

yeah, but i wasn't asking for you to waste your time on a critique for my post you pious faggot

when you ask for effort, you should put in effort

jesus you're retarded

>i remember the line about the ants, the rest is unmemorable, like a juvenile lydia davis kind of thing.

perfectly sums up why i should die

thank u

If you die, that's your choice and responsibility. I'm only speaking my opinion.