Getting published

You should know he's schizophrenic if you're confused on what's going on.

good job not using too many dialogue signaling words
and overall I like it

yeah I got that there was something there, nice concept, good writing but a little too thesaurasy at times like when you wrote "sloth like trot"
that line stood out just as being incongruous with the simpler writing of the rest of it

I know starting with waking up is a trope, it's not the first chapter so i thought it was alright.

oops this was meant for

I can see how "sloth like trot" can seem out of place.

The chapter is a pretty good representation of what the writing is like throughout the book. It's been difficult to judge the quality of my work because I've been so immersed in developing my style for so long.

Do you think it's good enough to keep an agent reading?

Honestly I thought it was good. The prose is clean and straight forward, nice to read. I also like the rhythm.
I thought the content was interesting as well. I'd have to agree with other user about the "waking up trope" and it does have a sort of old noir thing going on too, but I personally enjoyed it. You also seem to have a talent for sensory detail.
If this were the intro a novel I would keep reading.

Keep sending it out.
It's not clearly 'good enough' but it might be.

not the other guy btw

I like it a LOT
publish it xd

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